Tuesday, November 7, 2006

Just so you know

If I am not paying attention to anything specific or aren't concentrated, the next possibility is that I'm spacing out. And when I'm spacing out, it results into me traveling to a world full of people who have no relation to me, other than the fact that they came from my mind. It goes like this:

not concentrated + spacing out = to day dreaming, which is = to random scenes played out in my head for no reason at all

And with that explained, I end my entry with this goof ball:

“What do you want?”

I looked at him with suspicious eyes. He had that look, that look that said: ‘I feel like making your life hell today.’

He smiled—no, he grinned. That grin made me even more suspicious. He was up to some dirt, that was for sure.

“Why do you look at me like that?” he said, making an attempt to look innocent behind his grin. “You’re lookining at me as if I make your life difficult.”

I wanted to strangle him for reading my thoughts, and also for being so dense that he didn’t notice that he did.

“Just tell me what you want,” I looked away from his face and payed attention to the book in front of me, pretending to be really interested. I examined the title. Mathematics. Great. No hope for that.

“Class, turn to page 576 and read the introduction."

1 said miss mademoiselle:

Rain-drop said...

Do you use the word "lookining" on purpose, or is that a typo?

I like this. It's interesting, it has a distinct mood about it, and I like how you really get the MCs irritation at this guy across.

And no need for the 'daydreaming' explanation. XD Though it was amusing!

I have a suggestion for you: put all these ideas together. Or make several stories out of them. If the idea of a novel scares you, why not make them into short stories? Two or three pages is long enough.

For example, you could do a short story on whatsisname, the explorer guy - Varn, or whatever his name was, I'm sorry I forgot!. You could also do a short story on the woman who is dissatisfied with her husband.

Another suggestion is this - write a story set in modern times, from the point of view of a girl you age. That way it's close to home and easier to write. You could really make a great story stemming from this scene right here - it could be about this girl and the guy who irritates her. Also, you have posted other stuff similar to this, set in modern times, with teenagers and students and school, etc., Why not make a story about it? I'd be really intrigued to read it, just to let you know. ;D