My mommy's b-day is this Sunday. I've decided to get her a teddy bear, since my mom is mushy and silly like that. But it's not just any teddy bear. It's two teddy bears hugging eachother with a rose betwen their arms! How CUTE can it get?! She'll love it, I know it. Even if it'll be a bit late-- she'll love it. She's gotta!Anyway, that's not my dilemna. My dilemna is that I wanted to write a poem in her b-day card. A very cute card, btw, it is. I've only managed to make one that isn't as cheesy as the others and doesn't sound like a love poem... as much.
The flower stirs uncertainly
As the sun
Makes its way
Into its heart.
But you seem
To blossom
more than the most --
Fresh and full of smiles
You make the sun shine a bit more,
Brighter.
And then I'd say something like Happy Birthday, mom-- I love you so much etc. Yet later today I thought maybe I'd just say:
I thought for a while of how
I could be poetic
and make a poem for you.
Yet I realized
After a while
That in the end
There are no words
That can tell you
How much I love you.
But maybe I'll just write that and then add the other "poem" as an additional. Any suggestions?
1 said miss mademoiselle:
Lol, what's this last picture of the girl and the icecreams? It's cute. I like it. Made me smile.
I like both of the poems. The first is an abstract, lovely sort of poem. The second is a cute, honest kind; perhaps more personal. I think your mom will enjoy both. I can't decide for you which to put in your card (or both), but I'll tell you I enjoy both and I think they're both good.
I like the picture from your notebook (it is yours, yes?). Most intriguing. The sketch of the girl and her mom is really adorable.
You are such a sweet girl! Doing such nice things for your mommy. :D Good. It's so nice of you. And moms...there's just nothing and no one like them. They're special, moms are.
:) I'm sure she'll love the teddies, too. They sound adorable! *squee* Pic?
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